2013년 1월 14일 월요일

responisble essay about 'Brave'

    Have you ever watched the movie 'Brave'? It's a movie that shows the adventure of Merida who tries to make Elinor a human. In this essay, I would like to compare the personality of Merida and Elinor. I will also give some opinions what I think about those two people.

First is Merida. Merida is very stubborn. She is very free and likes to adventure. She also likes sports, especially archery. She does not like the rules. She is just same as her father. She wants to change her fate. By watching the burning red colored hair, you will probably figure out Merida’s personality.

Next is Elinor. She is very kind and also calm. She solves the empire’s problem very cleverly. But, she cares to much about royal family’s rules. She looks she is cold-hearted, but she is actually she is warm-hearted. She just believe in her fate, and also follow it.

Now, I will express my opinion about their personality. I personally want to be brave like Merida and also kind like Elinor. They have very opposite personality, but they try to understand each other and be closer. She just believes in her fate and follows it.My mom and I are sort of like this, too. So, I must learn the attitude to understand the difference and be brave to change my personality.

As a conlusion, I strongly recommend you to learn the attitude to understand and pick a side. Change the fate or Believe in fate. I am like Merida, but I would like to believe in my fate and follow it. Also, I will think very cleverly and reduce the argue between me and my mom... I love you mom!!!!

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  1. Is your essay a "responsible essay" or a "response essay"?

    You write that Merida is like her father and she wants to change her fate. How does King Fergus want to change his fate? You say that you want to brave like Merida, but you don't show how she is brave.

    In the end, you call for understanding and choosing a side. These ideas don't seem to go together for me. How do you see that they are connected?

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