Have you ever watched Ted? Today, I watched about one girl, Adara Svitak. I think that she is very intelligent and also ciritical. I definitely agree with her opinion that kids can do something better than adults for these three reasons. First, kids are more creative. Second, kids do not think about the limitations of project. Third, it is easier for kids to unite with each other.
First, kids are more creative than adults. Adults think in so realistic way, so they might be not creative. However, children doesn't have enough experience. Some of them will think that it is wierd, but that makes children more creative. This helps children make better work than adults.
Second, kids do not think about the limitations of project. In the case of adults, they will think only safe and limited works. However, kids will think in a very unique way and create interesting ideas of something. That kind of mind of kids will be helpful to complete their work easier than adults.
Third, it is easier for kids to unite with each other. Adults have their own strong opinion. Children do not have their own strong opinion, so they can be united much more easily than adults do. They also follow the way to consider other's feeling.
For these reasons, I emphasize that children can do better job than adults in some ways. First, kids are more creative. Second, kids do not think about limitation of project. Third, it is easier for kids to unite with others. I think that adults should share information in both ways. Thank you for reading my essay.
FINAL ESSAY ASSIGNMENT
12년 전
Your essay is very well organized.
답글삭제BUT... there is a big problem. You have cheated. I know this is a strong word to use, but you have copied the words of another writer and used them in your essay. This is a very bad thing to do if you don't tell or show that someone else wrote it.
Don't do it ever again!